Some great work so far Lauren. To ensure that all elements of your research and planning are level 4 (B-A*) you need to address the following:
1.font and colour palette-be specific about which you are leaning towards. What are the different fonts called? how many are you planning to use in your magazine? why?
2.language register-add examples from contents pages and double page spreads.
3.pitch-the animoto is attractive but lacks the 25 word element. what's happened to the text?
4.add some images to the audience research/UK tribes section.
5.photographers and graphic designers-you need to research 2 or 3 of each. add ten examples of their work. this adds depth and shows you haven't just picked the first two you found.
Thank you for the feedback Sir, I have taken into account all of the comments and applied the changes to the relevant posts. I have now changed the reasoning of the colour palettes and fonts, and which ones I prefer for my magazine. Hopefully as well the extra changes and additions to my blog meet the standard I am trying to achieve.
Some great work so far Lauren. To ensure that all elements of your research and planning are level 4 (B-A*) you need to address the following:
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2.language register-add examples from contents pages and double page spreads.
3.pitch-the animoto is attractive but lacks the 25 word element. what's happened to the text?
4.add some images to the audience research/UK tribes section.
5.photographers and graphic designers-you need to research 2 or 3 of each. add ten examples of their work. this adds depth and shows you haven't just picked the first two you found.
Thank you for the feedback Sir, I have taken into account all of the comments and applied the changes to the relevant posts. I have now changed the reasoning of the colour palettes and fonts, and which ones I prefer for my magazine. Hopefully as well the extra changes and additions to my blog meet the standard I am trying to achieve.
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